Chapter Twenty-Three -- Malfoy Manor

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In which Harry suffers a frontal lobe migraine for most of the chapter, the Random Death Eaters show common sense, Rowling completely ignores her own set-up for a character arc, all the wizards forget that they're wizards and Dobby is a deus ex machina.


Chapter Twenty-Three -- Malfoy Manor

( Also, Fenrir is creepily stalkerish, and everyone gets CAPSLOCKY. )